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Fan comic - Jay and Dicky 2 (update) by BAK-Hanul Fan comic - Jay and Dicky 2 (update) by BAK-Hanul
Actually, I'm majoring in comics (well, more like manga, Asian style comics) at the university(South Korea).
The style of American comics is so interesting and I want to study about it more and more. But.. not easy. Oh, English, too.

Reading or Listening is not a problem.
Only Writing makes me cry...:(;;............ I want to show you guys more natural sentences.
If I use wrong words or sentences, Tell me my errors, Please! (Especially, in my works!) :3

+randomkitty101:iconrandomkitty101: make my dialogue more natural and more nice!! Thanks a million!! :D
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:iconwhitekingmelchior:
WhiteKingMelchior Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconkatie-k-12345:
katie-k-12345 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
OMG This is so good!
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:iconketsukei:
ketsukei Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015   Digital Artist
:O theres no more after this one? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!? I NEED TO KNOW! *falls over*
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:iconuzumaki-dresden:
Uzumaki-Dresden Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Student General Artist
HOLY S**T!!!!!! Is J becoming what I think he is????
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:iconbugyear2005:
bugyear2005 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
more!
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:iconmyanko92:
myanko92 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
I love Dick's amused, easy-going face.  It's so awesome!  ^▽^  And this comic is amazing!!!  :D :D  The idea is great!!  I love it so much!
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ulquiorracoyle Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014
When is the next part out? This is really good!
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:iconthemodecrasher7:
TheModeCrasher7 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i still think jason looks hot with vamp teeth thoughJake hula 
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:iconloveless-yokai:
Loveless-Yokai Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
VAMPIRE!
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:iconaprilabadie:
aprilabadie Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Why does he have canines?
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:iconraphsgirl97:
raphsgirl97 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
hes a vampire! <3
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:iconaprilabadie:
aprilabadie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
Haha.that would happen to him
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:iconraphsgirl97:
raphsgirl97 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
Of course it would it raises his bad ass level but a thousand percent
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:iconaprilabadie:
aprilabadie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Haha.I read this fanfic where he is a vampire.its awesome
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:iconraphsgirl97:
raphsgirl97 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Link it up
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:iconbakabakabakabaka:
bakabakabakabaka Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait for the next update!! XD
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:iconstrikingcat:
StrikingCat Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
When is the next page upload?
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:icontoxiclilly:
Toxiclilly Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Filmographer
Jason just became Gothams sparkly heartthrob. 
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RobinFan4Ever Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Please make more!!!!!!
I REALLY want to know what happens!!!!
By the way, AWESOME comic!!!!! XDDDDD
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maximumgirl123 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Writer
Actually, your English is pretty good. The only thing that i see wrong is when Dick says "what the problem", unless your doing that for character, it should say "what's the problem" :) still awesome job!
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Ensatsu-Kokuryuha Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how these boys are drawn in your style! <3

By the way, I think there's a very (very!) small grammar error. I think your "what" needs to be "what's" or "what is".
Dick: "Okey-dokey. What's the problem?"

Other than that, I love this! I want to know what happens next soon!!
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:iconabiyasha:
abiyasha Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
This is amazing! I like your style!!
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:iconyumi012:
yumi012 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Wow. This is really good. I love this fan comic thing you have going. I read comics from the Batman Universe per say,  but I like you take on it. Please Continue.?
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WhiskeySalad Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Allow me to say that your art continues to be wonderful. I would point out tiny mistakes as well, but it looks like somebody covered that portion already. I'm from Asia too, and believe me, learning a new language is tough! I don't even remember my first language anymore, haha.
I do wish you luck, and I'd like to watch you to keep up-to-date with your works. :) (That, and because I'm a total sucker for any interaction between Dick and Jason...New 52 doesn't do their relationship/antagonism justice.)
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Spartan2016 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
That's epic I want more!!!!
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:iconcho-taicho:
Cho-taicho Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
Gosh,I love your art style so much!! ~♥
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:icone-dantes:
E-Dantes Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Excellent! You are pretty good doing comics! Dialogues may seems weird because of the languages but the ritm between images is very well done, totally understandable. Besides, is good to see Jay is not a crazy newby vampire. Will you continue it?
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Iwillbethenextrobin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Yes Jason you have puppy teeth! J.K. XD
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:iconmatsuri0w0:
matsuri0w0 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ohhhh FUCK@! :'''D ya lo comenzaste! me encanta!!!! x///D
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:iconshadowchan14:
Shadowchan14 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please do more of this this looks really cool
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:iconmillan93:
millan93 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
omg omg omg i love your art style and i know this comic just started but i love this!
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:iconvarebanos:
varebanos Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh wow! that was unexpected!!!! omg what will happen? please continue!
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:iconhotrobin99:
hotrobin99 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Artist
please keep going wit this comic idea I love it
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Magunick Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013   Digital Artist
DD: oww you have to keep going! I want this to happen XD omg i like your style and your colors are so shiny~  :333
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Manwe-Varda Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
Aww, Dick's smile! :D
Good job! :thumbsup:
Can't wait for more! ;)
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Icon-UK Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
I wonder if it's Dick's old girlfriend/fiend Dala, a vampiress who turned Dick (and her brother turned Bruce) vampy for a while back in the 1980's
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:iconbak-hanul:
BAK-Hanul Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm sorry I don't know about her ^-^;;
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:iconparisthedragon:
paristhedragon Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
0.0 omgggg
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:iconbak-hanul:
BAK-Hanul Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
0///0?? haha
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:iconparisthedragon:
paristhedragon Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X3
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:iconkittyotic:
Kittyotic Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Artist
This is awesome!  Can't wait for more!!!  :iconepiclaplz:
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:iconbak-hanul:
BAK-Hanul Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you~! But,  Wait Please :D hahaha
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:iconkittyotic:
Kittyotic Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Artist
lol okay...if I must...:icontuzkibreatheplz:
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:iconsoari-san:
Soari-san Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*Faints for so much awesome*
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:iconbak-hanul:
BAK-Hanul Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hey! It's time to get up! :D
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callousvixen Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
AAAAH!

OMG! That's a really cool major! I would love to study comics or even manga someday. :iconiloveitplz:

And I'm not very good when it comes to dialogues, too! :iconseriousfaceplz: I know the pain. :iconotlplz:

OH and fangs strangely look really nice on Jason. :iconheeplz:
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:iconbak-hanul:
BAK-Hanul Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
HAHA~ Thank you so much!!
I want you to study comics~ It's interesting and Good for drawing :D!

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randomkitty101 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! This is super cool, and I love the comic and the pictures' positions!

The dialogue does have a few grammar issues, but it's still understandable. But if you want it to sound a bit more natural, try this:

Jay: How's it going? Well, that's something I'd like to know too.
Dicky: Huh?
Jay: Last week, I was in...well, that's not important right now.
Dicky: So?
Jay: I fought with some weird villains, and now I have a little problem.
Dicky: Okey-dokey. What the problem?
Jay: What's the- Look at these! *shows teeth*

I don't mean to insult your English! This just has a little better grammar. Your spelling is perfect, and your art WAY amazing. This is just if you want help with the dialogue :3

Anyways, I love the comic, the art and the idea s AMAZING. I am very excited if and when you make another page.

Good luck!
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:iconbak-hanul:
BAK-Hanul Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you randomkitty101! I just get out of my bed(It's morning, in Korea)!
Your dialogue is perfect! :XD: I have to do~! Wait...!
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