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Fan comic - Jay and Dicky 2 (update) by BAK-Hanul Fan comic - Jay and Dicky 2 (update) by BAK-Hanul
Actually, I'm majoring in comics (well, more like manga, Asian style comics) at the university(South Korea).
The style of American comics is so interesting and I want to study about it more and more. But.. not easy. Oh, English, too.

Reading or Listening is not a problem.
Only Writing makes me cry...:(;;............ I want to show you guys more natural sentences.
If I use wrong words or sentences, Tell me my errors, Please! (Especially, in my works!) :3

+randomkitty101:iconrandomkitty101: make my dialogue more natural and more nice!! Thanks a million!! :D
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:iconaprilabadie:
Why does he have canines?
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:iconbakabakabakabaka:
bakabakabakabaka Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait for the next update!! XD
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:iconstrikingcat:
When is the next page upload?
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Toxiclilly Jan 1, 2014  Student Filmographer
Jason just became Gothams sparkly heartthrob. 
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RobinFan4Ever Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Please make more!!!!!!
I REALLY want to know what happens!!!!
By the way, AWESOME comic!!!!! XDDDDD
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maximumgirl123 Dec 8, 2013  Student Writer
Actually, your English is pretty good. The only thing that i see wrong is when Dick says "what the problem", unless your doing that for character, it should say "what's the problem" :) still awesome job!
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Ensatsu-Kokuryuha Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how these boys are drawn in your style! <3

By the way, I think there's a very (very!) small grammar error. I think your "what" needs to be "what's" or "what is".
Dick: "Okey-dokey. What's the problem?"

Other than that, I love this! I want to know what happens next soon!!
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:iconabiyasha:
This is amazing! I like your style!!
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:iconyumi012:
Wow. This is really good. I love this fan comic thing you have going. I read comics from the Batman Universe per say,  but I like you take on it. Please Continue.?
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:iconwhiskeysalad:
Allow me to say that your art continues to be wonderful. I would point out tiny mistakes as well, but it looks like somebody covered that portion already. I'm from Asia too, and believe me, learning a new language is tough! I don't even remember my first language anymore, haha.
I do wish you luck, and I'd like to watch you to keep up-to-date with your works. :) (That, and because I'm a total sucker for any interaction between Dick and Jason...New 52 doesn't do their relationship/antagonism justice.)
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